22+ Too Formal Writing. Formal writing and informal writing have different language and structure in english. When formal english is used in writing, sentences tend to be long and complex, and grammar rules are followed strictly.
In academic writing you need formal writing.
Also could you look at the style and improve it where you think it's too formal? A formal writing style shows a limited range of emotions and avoids emotive punctuation such as exclamation points a formal writing style is not necessarily better than an informal style, rather. Also could you look at the style and improve it where you think it's too formal? Both formal and informal writing is used in our day to day life but in different situations.